tnme's fanfic

[tnme]

GENRE (romance, general, humor): general/romance/poetry
TITLE: I wish
LINK: amoredianima.proboards85.com/index.cgi?board=thelibrary&action=display&thread=1189459432
RATING: -
PAIRING(S) (if there are any) and type of pairings (het, slash, etc): Bella's POV
WARNINGS: -
SUMMARY: Bella's wish to become a vampire
STATUS (complete, WIP): complete

I wish I was a vampire
with sharp and pointy fangs
with alluring eyes
and pearly whites
and speed to catch my prey

I wish I was a vampire
with skin as hard as stone
nails that cut through everything
and skin as white as snow

I wish I was a vampire
an odd wish
but true
cause if I was a vampire
I would be with you

[onyx_rain]

YES!!! (Jumps up and down) new fanfics!!! I like the poem! Very much what I would wish!

[Lon-Dubh]

The poem is nice, it has a good rhyme scheme, and what would you call it? I'm not sure the exact word I'm looking for, but I think the word "rythm" works well.