Poem Contest #1

[Dazzle]

Poem Contest #1: Write a poem about something you feel strongly about. Does not have to be Twilight related.

Point System:

First Place: 70 Reputation Points
Second Place: 50 Reputation Points
Third Place: 30 Reputation Points
Participation: 15 Reputation Points

At least 4 entries must be entered to be judged. If not, all entries will receive only Paricipation Points. Any questions about this contest, please do not post here, we have a questions board for that.


*Please only post your entry below. Everything else can go in Contest Discussion

[iluvedward]

I wrote this two month ago when I was addicted to Blood and Chocolate

[shadow=red,left,300]Death Wolf
He waits in the battlefields,
He waits in the shadows,
Ready to pounce!

You lay on the once green grass,
Your side leaking out blood,
You fought your last battle you say to yourself.

The death wolf stands above you,
Your eyes were closed,
Next thing you feel is a paw in your side,

“You like you fought you last, brave wolf,”
You just look at him not knowing what to say,
“Welcome to Death Pack.”

Death Wolf howls,
You felt your spirit leave your body,
You were dead.

You wait in the battlefields,
You wait in the shadows,
Ready to pounce! [/shadow]

[evangeline7]

You never knew
That I loved you
But, I was right there
Near the night fire
How could you not see
Now, look at what has become of me
I live a lie
Like a nightmare
But I wait everyday
Right there,
Where I found u
Where you couldn’t find me
Where I was lost
Where you were found
Where now I stand
In this very land
Looking to see
If you spot me
But I’m still living a lie
Perhaps this crush will die
But how cud u not know
That I loved u so.

~evangeline

[vampireloverforeva]

he stands there unnoticed
as the death bed awaits her at her side
she turns, and sees him standing there
she tries to mutter a scream
but all that comes out is a rasp
a reflection of all that is happening
he moves to quickly
again she sees nothing but the silent walls around her
laughter fills her room
it fills her very lungs until she can no longer breath
no one hears her call as he pounces
she falls, hitting her head on the wooden floor
"i thought you loved me!" she whispers
he stands there laughing as he approaches
she tries to crawl, but to no avail
everything goes black
the last thing she hears is two words
"im sorry"

by Dezarae Turner (me)

[edwardandbella]

DREAMING OF...

Don’t look back
Never look back
Do you really want to see
What you’re missing?
He’s walking away
Wont return
You’ve wasted your time
And you still haven’t learned
He lies and doubts
You trust and believe
Did you really think
“I want him for me”?
He will never be yours
Wake to the truth
You know you were dreaming
So why is there sorrow?
You knew this would happen
It’s the way the story goes
If you didn’t see it coming
I’d say you’re a fool
Forget all the times
He made you laugh, cry and love
Forget who he is
And maybe the tears will subside
Just don’t hang on
Go ahead and give up
What good can come
From what you’ve dreamed up?

by: Caitlyn [me]

[cgifford5]

Sink

It's dark and my still-beating heart races
This is the most perfect moment I could ever imagine
Right before you draw your breath
Right before you sink your teeth in
Right before you take me away
All there is now is an overwhelming anticipation
All I'm waiting for is you
End my life
Show me the meaning of pain
Of beauty
Of rebirth, in a sense
Show me what it's like to be you
Share with me your power, your wisdom, your death
Lead me to the light, dear angel
Bring me back to this world, changed
All I'm waiting for is you
Always

by: Courtney (me)

[vaudevillevamp]

W-O-W!!! Those are all really good...huh...
well I just wrote this one today...well I guess now it was yesterday...anywho

I gave you the key to my heart
I handed you my soul
And the life that goes with
You didn’t ask me to
But gave them, I did

I divulged all of my soul
My life, my secrets, my love
Making myself vulnerable
You didn’t ask me to
But tell you, I did

Then I kissed you once
My heart throbbing, singing
Enchanting my senses
You didn’t ask me to
But love you, I did

Then you left me here
Sobbing
I wanted to go with
But you didn’t ask me to
So leave me, you did

You tore me beyond repair
Taking my life
You mangled my heart
leaving me an empty shell
Kill me inside, you did

You shattered my heart into a million pieces
And I still love you
With every remaining fragment
As I try to piece it back together
Miss you, I do

I’m alone and broken
Numb and anguished
But if this is what you really want of me
If this is how you really feel
Stay here, I will

By Krista Johnston (moi)

[Cindy]

Friends

Good friends are hard to find
Harder to leave
And impossible to forget
A friend is like a four leaf clover
Hard to find
And lucky to find
Some people make the world special
Just by being in it
Best friends are the siblings
That God forgot to give us
When it hurts to look ahead
You can look beside you
And your best friend will be there
True friendship never ends
Friends are forever
Good friends are like stars
You don't always see
But you know they're there
Always there
Most people walk
In and out of your life
But only friends
Leave footprints in your heart

[Alcyone]

I wrote this during a bad period of my life. I was becoming like Bella, a zombie. So this was born out of my fear of dying...while your body remains alive.

Trapped within Obsidian Glass
Watching the world pass;
Dead inside and dark outside,
Scarlet painted hide.

They try to help; they only hurt
As the mess within, you try to sort.
They each reach out, touch by turn--
Kind caresses burn.

Physical scars fade in time;
Emotional gashes remain alive.
Walls come up, protective shields;
The old you, silent, yields.

You've given up; you cannot fight,
A Soul imprisoned in eternal night.
Thoughts turn mad, emotions lack--
I'm not coming back.

[blackroselove1989]

i like 2 write storys and the one im on now i made a poem for the girl in it, on here past that she has dreams about but cant find that right words say other in poem so i hope u like it and maybe one day i'll finsh this story heehe in have like 20 storys that i've never finshed



LOST PAST


Look at me
Can’t you see
The blood all over me
Mom, Dad where did you go?
Let me go
Let me go
I have….
I have to save them!
Vampire
Vampires
can’t you hear me
They said they were vampires
Screaming….
that’s my mom
Save her
don’t run
don’t take me away from her
Mom, Dad I love you
Don’t leave me
I need you
I love you
I..LOVE……YOU!!
Crying
………..
A big, big dog
My mind goes blank
I just cant think
My tears are washed away
Rain falls
The blood stays
It all ways stays
How do I know that?
Lights
Who’s there?
They say their cops
They ask my name

“my name?”
They ask how I got blood on me and who’s it is
“I…..I….I”
Why cant I remember?
Why cant I remember even my name?

[azure]

Sunset
by: Azure

Do you see what I see?
An orange sphere
over the horizon,
over the sea.

Does it not call out to your heart
as it calls out to mine?
Do you hear not
the message it’s trying to put across
or the sorrow in its voice?

As I stood there,
alone by the seashore,
I heard its message
and felt it to my soul.

One message.
Simple yet heartfelt.
Common but true.

And the message?
Each one of us
is like the sun.
At one point in our lives
we get the opportunity
to live out the highest point of our lives.

This, of course is just a mirage.
Yes, a mirage.
One that won’t last
because sooner or later,
we must come down and give way
to the rise of another…

This is what is known
as the sunset
of our lives…

i wrote this a month ago when i had nothing to do and saw a pic of a sunset.. hope that you guys will like it!

[twilightfanatic]

Together? Forever?



Edward and Isabella,
Romeo and Juliet,
They were never even close,
But both their loves were set.

One was a vampire,
One a human being,
Both have different empires,
Bu thats not how its being seen.

Love for them is never easy,
Especially in the sun,
Both of them are always queasy,
Always on the run.

Italy and Washington,
Anywhere they go,
There love will be forever,
From their head to their toes.

He is immortal,
And she wants to be,
He says she will be,
When she turnes eighteen.

Theres only one condition to her immortality,
Shes not quite ready for this,
So he says, "Marry me first.",
Her mother would call this the death kiss.

All she wants is to be his forever,
She cannot ask for more,
He says he will not ruin her life,
To her this is a bore.

Her heart stops,
When he is near,
And he hasnt breatherd,
For almost ninty years.

Even thought they go though bad times,
Laurent, Victoria, James, Aro, and such,
These are some of the small things,
That cause so much.

They compare a lion to a lamb,
And a simgle tree to a forest,
Even though sometimes,
Theyre both stubborn as a ram.

One Running Fast,
One Walking Slow,
One Sturdy,
The Other A Klutz.

One Of Them So Beautiful,
The Other One Is Not,
These are the things you can compare,
To a vampire and human who can love ANYWHERE.

-Twilight Fanatic

[darklover]

(I just wrote this on the top of my head... i know i don't stand a chance with those great poems... but hey i just wanna participate in something!)

The Bite

Why did he thirsty for my blood?
He walked closer to me
Opened his mouth; his teeth coated in poison
I screamed...
But no one was there to answer my cry
I tried to make a run for it...
But it was too late.
He grabbed me by my wrists...
He pressed his lips on my neck...
And bit.
His teeth pierced in my neck
Torturing me.
I screamed as loud as I could
And was struggling to be let free.
All of the sudden
He was gone.
I collapsed
And I was left alone on the floor
Twitching uncontrollably in pain in the dark.....
For days I was on that floor
Wallowing in pain.
Finally, I stood up.
I looked in the mirror in the room
And I was as pale as a ghost,
And my eyes had changed color.
And for some reason....
I thirsted for blood...

[teeksz]

[Somethings missing ]


Deep inside my soul
Deep into my life
There was something missing
A feeling
More then anything you felt
When you left that’s what I dealt with
When you left that why
I never dared to say your name
When you left
I was blank nothing could make it better
A feeling that was missing, was
Having you around to hold me
Having you kiss me
Having you tell me you love me
All those things made me smile
Made me feel like I wasn’t so alone after all
But now you left ,your gone , no need for me now
I realize everyone’s alone in the end
Either you like it or not