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Post by Dazzle on Apr 30, 2008 22:34:20 GMT -5
Fanfiction Challenge #3
Suggested by Alcyone
Write a fanfiction - with plot - that has no more than 60 words. Good luck!
First Place: 60 Reputation Points
Second Place: 45 Reputation Points
Third Place: 30 Reputation Points
Participation: 15 Reputaion Points
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Post by midori on May 28, 2008 18:49:27 GMT -5
Okay, I'm not sure if this counts, but it's a fanfiction
in the form of a poem. . .
Hope you like it. . . It took awhile to write becuase of the 60 word limit.
At the End. . .
Golden eyes stare at my face,
The pain in them I can’t replace.
He fought for my life, but it wasn’t enough
His hands feel very cold at the touch.
I can see the anguish in his eyes,
As I tell him my final good-byes.
My breathing gets hard, it’s almost the end.
I love you Edward, my dear boyfriend.
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Post by ForgottenRose_13 on Jun 2, 2008 22:13:21 GMT -5
Need
"Do it," I whispered.
The kind eyes watched me for a moment. "Rosalie, are you sure?"
"I need him." I looked pleadingly at my father. "Please." I kissed the unknown man on the forehead.
Carlisle gave me one more searching look then bent down to seal my fate and that of the man I had just both saved and cursed.
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Post by onyx_rain on Jun 11, 2008 20:52:32 GMT -5
Change
"Bella," he sighed. His timeless eyes held mine for a moment, and a pain, deeper than I was expecting, ran through me.
Everything I wanted was wrapped into this moment; something that I had been waiting for. Dreaming about.
"It's okay, I trust you,"
He smiled for a moment, leaning in close to my neck.
"I love you," he whispered.
I was thinking about right before he changed Bella when I wrote this. I'm sorry if its terrible: I've never written a story or anything before.
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Post by erynlasgalen on Jan 16, 2009 9:36:25 GMT -5
Green Eyes[/i]
Green eyes. Bright feverish green eyes burn into my consciousness like a brand. I hesitate for half a second; wavering, unsure. Would I be the one to extinguish that green flame forever? Could I be? Suddenly, vividly, her voice, "What others cannot do, this is what you must do for my Edward." And his fate- no, our fate, is decided.
As you might be able to see, in this short story I tried to capture what Carlisle might have been thinking just before he changed Edward.
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